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1. ORIGINAL VERSION
: The traveling disturbance intensity division
is basically away from the traveling line the far
and near. Different distance reflection traveling
activity human disturbance intensity is different,
distance is nearer, the disturbance is bigger, distance
is farther, the disturbance is smaller.
OUR EDITING :
The intensity of the traveling disturbance can be
divided by the distance of the traveling routes.
Different distance reflects different intensities
of the human disturbance caused by traveling activities;
the shorter the distance, the stronger the disturbance,
and the longer the distance, the weaker the disturbance.
2. ORIGINAL VERSION :
A.salina is a species of Branchiopoda crustacean
and one of standard experimental organism of marine
contamination toxicity testing
OUR EDITING :
A. salina belongs to Branchiopoda:Crustacea and
is one of the standard experimental organisms used
for toxicity testing to asses levels of contamination
in the marine environment
3. ORIGINAL VERSION
: Now already sixteen kinds of antiserum
for virus in the fruit trees have made, but the
system of the antiserum has the difficulty and the
price is expensive
OUR EDITING : Currently,
16 types of antiserum for virus affecting fruit
trees have been identified; however, it is difficult
to produce antiserums and they are expensive
4. ORIGINAL VERSION
: The annealing procedure at 800oC
for an hour was applied to the sample grown at 630oC
OUR EDITING :
Annealing of the sample grown at 630oC
was carried out at 800oC for 1 hour
5. ORIGINAL VERSION :
The single crystal ZnO was used as comparison
OUR EDITING :
The single crystal ZnO was used as reference.
6. ORIGINAL VERSION
: Large-scale commercial release of transgenic
crops has sparked off intensive debates worldwide
regarding their biosafety in the agroecosystem
OUR EDITING : Due
to concerns regarding the biosafety of transgenic
crops in the agrosystem, large-scale commercial
release of transgenic crops has sparked off intensive
debates worldwid
7. ORIGINAL VERSION
: according to the visually different hybridization
image on array
OUR EDITING :
according to the visual interpretation of the different
hybridization images on array
8. ORIGINAL VERSION
: Potassium resource is poor in China, and
most of potassium fertilizer depends on import (Wang
1996), which consumes a large quantity foreign exchange
annually. Lack of soil K is getting worse and worse,
the effective supplement should be found to accommodate
expenditure of soil potassium aiming at different
soil types and planting system. Wheat straw is abundant
organic material, which is ubiquitous and it’s
organic potassium resource. Straw is returned to
soil directly or indirectly, which can constitute
a favorable soil environment (Li et al. 2002). Most
previous works were studied on effect of fertilization
and straw to soil on soil physical character, basic
nutrient change and improvement of crop yield and
quality (Nel et al. 1996; Wang et al. 1996; Li et
al. 1998; Lao et al. 2002; Turley et al. 2003; Liu
et al. 2005 ), and experiments were scarcely studied
on different forms of soil potassium and potassium
contribution to soil.
OUR EDITING :
China has poor resources of potassium and large
quantities of potassium fertilizer are being imported
every year (Wang 1996), which consumes foreign exchange
in large amount. As there is considerable decrease
of soil K, an effective solution that can help reduce
expenditure on soil K and is suitable for application
to different types of soil and planting systems
should be found. Wheat straw, which is ubiquitous,
is rich in organic material and it is the source
of organic potassium. Straw is returned to soil
either directly or indirectly, which can constitute
a favorable soil environment (Li et al. 2002). Most
of the research that was carried out previously
has focused on the effect of straw on the fertility
of soil, the changes in the physical characteristics
of the soil, the changes caused in the levels of
basic nutrients, and the improvement in the quality
of crop and yield (Nel et al. 1996; Wang et al.
1996; Li et al. 1998; Lao et al. 2002; Turley et
al. 2003; Liu et al. 2005). Only few experiments
have focused on different forms of soil potassium
and the contribution of potassium to soil.
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